Dear Mr. Johnson:
I am a public relations representative and I just wanted to let you know about a local organization, the Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA), what they do. CVAIA is striving to teach people ways to become financial independent. The organization helps people to understand the difference between passive and active income.
CVAIA provides a non-threatening environment for all who are interested to come and become educated. The organization wants to help people understand that it doesn’t matter how much you make, rich or poor, all are welcome to come learn.
The organization is on an open membership basis, which allows members to join for free. CVAIA educates through holding meetings twice a month on every other Thursday. The organization meets at the Chamber of Commerce in Logan, Utah at 160 N. Main Street.
If you would like anymore information regarding the CVAIA and their purpose feel free to contact me though email at amy.jensen@aggiemail.usu.edu or through telephone at 435-876-9999.
Thank you,
Amy Jensen
Thursday, October 9, 2008
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2 comments:
Amy, great job on your first draft. I like the way you introduce yourself and the fact that your email is personable. I was able to find the 4 key messages in your pitch, yet it was still short and sweet. Just some word choice adjustments and your final pitch will be perfect! Great job!
Amy, great informative email about CVAIA. The only thing I would add is the current importance of this organization. When writing an email pitch, it is important tell the journalist why your idea is good for their readers.
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